The world is centered on the
money circling it, and its many varieties and currencies, and throughout
history, the most famous leaders of the 20th century thought of a
different way of handling money in their own country, or state. Regardless,
each of these ways was standing out in the Cold War, the classic battle of
Communism against Capitalism, or in economic senses, planned economics against
free market. Each has its own methods and surpasses each one of the other’s
individually, almost leaving a
stalemate…almost.
Planned Economics is a system
that consists of the government monopolizing the money of the people of a
certain country, and half the world’s countries used to take on this plan
during the Cold War, but now, only 3 countries used that system in its
totality: Cuba, North Korea, and Laos. The government controls the income of
the country, sets the pricing, production levels, and handles the job
positions. Which is mostly used in left wing political powers, such as the
three countries, and some other systems that use most planned economics with
free market, like Venezuela, China, and Russia.
The advantages of having planned
economics is that in a perfect system, there would be no unemployment, think
about a public school, where you fit, you go, there are also the adjustable
prices; governments could make it to be more affordable to more people in their
country. The problem with this system is that since the money is all government
based, there could be a surge of a totalitarian government, and may be
oppression of rights of the people[i],
also gives a higher probability of corruption since, the government has
such easy access to the money. The other main disadvantage is that, since
everyone can get a job, the workers may not be efficient since they didn’t go
through an admission process, or maybe they had to get assigned to another area
because their area of expertise was full capacity.
The other system
is free market, otherwise known as capitalism. It’s a system that many
right-winged leaders used in the Cold War, and it’s spreading throughout the
world. On a full free market system, nothing is government-owned, and it’s all
about private companies like Gucci, Mercedes, Levi, among others, branded
products, which are more expensive than the generic brands bought here in
Bogotá with the “Exito” brand. There are currently no countries in the world
ran by an entire free market economic system, in fact, the most economically
free country in the world is Hong Kong with 89.3% economic liberty.[ii]
Capitalism is highly Darwinian in nature,[iii]
what that basically means is that it’s most suitable for the higher richer
classes, because if a company loses strength, like a housing slump, there’s
less demand, leading to less profit, and the poor classes suffer more that the
middle, and rich classes, that is one of the big disadvantages of free market.
Capitalism also
follows strictly the demand and supply
principle, in which when something goes out of fashion, and a new trend
emerges, the demand and supply balance is uncertain for a couple of weeks,
maybe months. This is due to the time taken to slow down the “out-of-fashion”,
and produce more of the new trend.
An advantage of
free market lies right on the name, free.
Since its all private, and no government control there’s more individual
freedoms and more profit, which leads to economic growth, there is less
corruption and there’s a higher quality of life. There is also the liberty of
choice by the people.[iv]
Some disadvantages lie on the supply part of the balance, sometimes
the companies can’t stock enough product and have to get more raw materials
(paper, rubber, steel) which leads to a higher pollution rate, there’s also a
problem with the big bullies of some competing companies, there’s too much control
gained and it’s just too overpowered, and with that, efficiency loss[v].
These were the
two main systems of economy lying around in the world, but in reality, all but
3 countries use a mix of both systems, and all the leaders are doing is trying
to find the perfect ratio between both.
In my opinion,
I’m pro for a mix system, but a little biased for a planned economic system, as
it’s more humanitarian and gives more people a chance to make a good quality of
living, but only if administered correctly, a planned economy can work well,
but my hope is that someday, the perfect ratio between planned and free market
economy is found and the left and right wings in politics can be even, since
the perfect system is more likely to become universal. This world better change
for the good of the people, and I hope that it will.
[i] IB Economics Text Book, page 11
[ii]
http://www.humanevents.com/2007/03/05/top-10-most-economically-free-countries/
[iii]
http://money.howstuffworks.com/free-market-economy1.htm
[iv]
http://www.enotes.com/homework-help/what-advantages-disadvantages-free-market-eco-389689
[v] IB Economics Text Book, page
11
This essay contains a rich and powerful use of vocabulary which is really amazing because it makes it entertaining to read. I agree that a mix between a planned economy and a free market economy would be the perfect system, because this way both wealth and unfortunate people would be economically stabled. It is unlikely left and right wing political groups would come to an agreement that can balance both systems correctly and evenly. In my opinion this essay was easy to read and to understand the content in it.
ResponderEliminarIn this essay, you have clearly stated what a planned and a free market economy is with all the advantages and disadvantages that support the explanations. As you have used different examples, one of them is, ``that a free market economy is all about private companies´´, it makes it clear on who runs that economy. As you mix the essay with some history (cold war, classic battle of communism ), it makes it entertaining when reading it, as it can be related to the past.
ResponderEliminarYour essay has a wide range of vocabulary which shows it in more depth. As you say, `` I´m pro for a mixed system´´, I agree since it will be a balanced economy giving people a better life. I would probably take out the part of your own opinion( ``my hope...´´) in the last paragraph and state it in a new sentence so that it can stand out more.
Overall, you have done a good and clear essay since it was easy to understand.
Fátima Crespo